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It’s time to move to the “why I liked my authors’ writing” segment. This is the BEST part of the agenting process, reading a potential project that brings an excitement and enthusiasm. This segment is all about the writer’s voice, and ability to keep the agent’s interest.
First and foremost, it’s the story that needs to grab my attention. By this point, the book idea survived the initial round of the query process; now it’s time to see if the writer can present the idea successfully within the chapters. No matter what the topic or storyline, every writer should strive to get the agent excited about the material being presented. If I lose interest within the first few pages of the writing sample, the project will definitely be turned down. Moral of the story: Keep the material engaging and interesting from the first page.
The next (and most important) step is the writer’s voice. Now that you’ve gotten an agent’s attention, and there is an interest in the project, the only way to keep pace moving forward (toward representation) is by providing a strong narrative. If the writing voice is strong, there’s a good chance I personally will lose track of time, as I’m enjoying the “read.” For any writer hoping to attain an agent, this should be your goal.
One of my authors once told me he reads his chapters aloud as part of the writing process. As a result, his writing voice is dead on. Hence, time seems “to fly” when I read his work. Obviously this is only one approach; the lesson here is that he gained my attention by being extremely thorough and prepared before sending out his query. Moral of the story: Fine tune your writing to its fullest strength before beginning the query process.
Last but not least, look at the conclusion of the story. If you’ve managed to gain an agent’s attention, the book needs to end as good as it started. In fiction, it’s evident when a writer isn’t able to bring the narrative to a conclusion; where the story seems to have jumped off a figurative cliff, thereby leaving a lack of finality to the overall storyline. In nonfiction, the chapter outline needs to reflect a successful closing to the discussion of the book’s topic. Much like seeing a bad movie ending, where the movie patrons feel they’ve lost a hunk of their precious time, this same feeling needs to be avoided during the reading experience. Moral of the story: Put the same work into the conclusion of your writing (as the beginning), to ensure the agent walks away with the same excitement initially experienced.
Of course, every agent brings his/her own reading preferences to the overall query process. What one agent doesn’t like = a project a different agent would LOVE to represent. That’s the beauty of the publishing industry, there are many ideas and perspectives, and folks who will happily work with them. This is why I love my job.
What a fun and interesting week of blogs and “reads!” Instead of commentating on all of them, here are a few of the articles themselves – so go check them out!
Fusenews: Long Time Passing - by Elizabeth Bird, School Library Journal
Kid Goth: Neil Gaiman’s fantasies - by Dana Goodyear, New Yorker
What You Need Before You Query – by Janet Reid, at Fine Print Literary Management
The Death of the Sluth Pile – by Katherine Rosman, Wall Street Journal
The Slush Pile – by Andy Ross, at the Andy Ross Agency
Happy reading everyone!
This morning, while dealing with the wintry precipitation on my sidewalks and driveway, an illustration of shovelling snow and the process of planning one’s publishing/writing career came to mind. Yes, even while pushing snow around, publishing still is at the forefront of my mind.
1. Look at the bigger picture – determine where your book will fit within a particular category, and within the larger publishing industry.
Wintery illustration: If one is shovelling snow in 40 mph winds, it’s a good idea to hit the spots that are absolutely necessary. Why would one shovel the lawn when only the sidewalks and driveway are necessary?
Take this approach with publishing. Why would a writer be too broad with a book idea? It’s much better to narrow down the topic/approach, so that one’s writing voice is truly effective.
2. Choose a path – One needs to determine the initial marketing plan (i.e. writing platform) hand-in-hand with developing one’s book idea.
Wintery illustration: To use the snow blower or the shovel? Using the shovel means it’ll take longer to remove the snow. Using the snow blower will obviously hasten the process. However using the snow blower in 40 mph winds may result in more work, i.e. the snow blowing back at the snow remover. Yet, using the shovel, and choosing the perfect starting point and methodically removing the snow to a designated stopping point = less work, and less need to “redo” it.
There’s nothing more discouraging than seeing a wonderful book idea for a first-time writer, only to realize that the person has no writing platform. It’s evident the writer has put his/her heart into the process of writing the book, but sadly didn’t develop a marketing plan to go along with it. I always look at the book idea and the writer’s “platform,” as most editors will want to see strength in both of these areas. If it seems the author can take care of the “platform,” there’s still a chance I’ll work with him/her. It just means that the writer will need to work on this area before we can move forward with the submission proccess to the publishers.
My advice? Think about how to promote yourself, use social networks, join organizations that advocate and support writing, and more. Meanwhile develop one’s writing voice simlutaneously. It’ll save time, patience, and bring a sense of fulfillment to the writing experience.
3. Be prepared - Put on your figurative armor. Do the best you can do, and don’t take the rejections too personally.
Wintery illustration: One thing that is necessary is good bundling for the shovelling process. A good coat, scarf, mittens, and clothes layering is absolutely necessary. Assume it will be cold, so prepare accordingly. Hence the 40 mph winds will not make the shoveller cold; thereby the shoveller is able to “weather” the experience.
Everyone knows that getting published requires thick skin, as any editor can only take on a limited # of projects. With the high rejection rates (from both agents & editors), the best thing any writer can do is be prepared. In addition to having a marketing plan in working progress, any author should put on his/her figurative armor. Instead of getting overly emotional due to rejections, remember the armor you are wearing-that this is a normal process.
4. Alter your plan as needed – If one’s marketing plan and/or writing voice isn’t working, take the time to edit/tweak the weak spots. It will be to one’s advantage.
Wintery illustration: Let’s say that despite Point A (starting point) and Point B (the end point) having been pre-determined, they aren’t resulting in the best (or most efficient) shovelling “path.” The back is hurting, the snow is deeper than initially expected, and it’s hard to keep a positive attitude. Reevaluate where to start & end again, and move on with the new plan.
No writer should finish a book, only to realize later that the entire book needs to be re-written. Talk about frustrating! Taking the time to have others critique one’s writing (during the writing process) is a good thing. Not only will it strengthen the book and one’s chance of getting published, but one will be able to determine if the storyline is on track. Ultimately if the book isn’t working, a new path can be determined before completion.
Any questions? Let me know.


